Wednesday, January 24, 2007

Ians poem - First part






















AND I'M BACK WITH A POEM !

GOES LIKE THIS :




A MOMENT

A TIME

WE ALL DENY

FEIGNING IGNORENCE TO WHAT WAS CONSIGNED


FROM DUST TO DUST WE WERE GIVEN TO LAST

ADVICE OF WHICH WAS CONFERRED TO US

BUT UP TO DATE WE PAID NO ATTENTION

OF WHAT WOULD TAKE PLACE AFTER RECEIVING LIFE'S PENSION

...

( Ian's comment-poem when he stopped here )











Coming back tomorrow to edit the second part of Ian's poem...


4 Comments:

Blogger Tom Bailey said...

The rhymed words are unique. I like that about it.

12:35 PM  
Blogger jac said...

Is this Haiku ? Mesmerising !!!

6:32 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

wow...i really like what u've done to the first pic..:-)

9:04 PM  
Blogger net-net4 said...

Tom, Jac, Lady !
Glad to find you here..
The poem is written by Yan,
you can visit his blog in this place:
http://blownawry.blogspot.com

5:51 AM  

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