Ians poem - First part


AND I'M BACK WITH A POEM !
GOES LIKE THIS :
A MOMENT
A TIME
WE ALL DENY
FEIGNING IGNORENCE TO WHAT WAS CONSIGNED
FROM DUST TO DUST WE WERE GIVEN TO LAST
ADVICE OF WHICH WAS CONFERRED TO US
BUT UP TO DATE WE PAID NO ATTENTION
OF WHAT WOULD TAKE PLACE AFTER RECEIVING LIFE'S PENSION
...
( Ian's comment-poem when he stopped here )
Coming back tomorrow to edit the second part of Ian's poem...

4 Comments:
The rhymed words are unique. I like that about it.
Is this Haiku ? Mesmerising !!!
wow...i really like what u've done to the first pic..:-)
Tom, Jac, Lady !
Glad to find you here..
The poem is written by Yan,
you can visit his blog in this place:
http://blownawry.blogspot.com
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