Thursday, January 25, 2007

Ians poem - Second part





















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WOULD WE EVER EXPERIENCE RENAISSANCE

AGES AFTER MANKINDS ABSENCE ?

NO ONE BOTHERED GIVING IT A THOUGHT

WHETHER OR NOT THERE'S LIFE AFTER WE ROT


TO SOME IT SEEMS THERE'S REINCARNATION

OF WHICH DEPENDS IF YOU'VE SINNED BEYONG RECOGNITION

TO OTHERS THERE EXIST A HIGH HEAVENS

THAT ONLY GRANTS ACCES TO DEVOUT ADHERENTS

...

( Ian's comment-poem when he passed here )









Coming back tomorrow to edit the third part of Ian's poem

4 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

Where do you go when you're lonely
Where do you go when you're blue
Where do you go when you're lonely
I'll follow you...
When the stars go blue......

Love this chorus...
Have you heard it? by the Corrs and U2.

9:10 PM  
Blogger net-net4 said...

Yes...is a nice one... :)

5:37 AM  
Blogger jac said...

Dreams are now wingless, feeble silvers

a Hornbill stay waiting, raindrops his tears

when he choose crying, mind shrunken, here

tears come squirting, flooding elsewhere.

~jac~

11:39 AM  
Blogger net-net4 said...

Hi Jac !
Your poem touch the heart !
I will edit it in few minutes in the front page...
here tears come squirting...

7:18 AM  

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